posted by Tim S at 10:31 PM
Oh, yeah. Right on!
check mate! :)
Love chess. Very good Tim!!
made me smile :)
I'd take out "by" as in:inexperience exposed --the way he touchesthe chess pieces:)Chess is my very favourite game.
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Oh, yeah. Right on!
check mate! :)
Love chess. Very good Tim!!
made me smile :)
I'd take out "by" as in:
inexperience exposed --
the way he touches
the chess pieces
:)
Chess is my very favourite game.
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