Monday, January 08, 2007

inexperience
exposed - by the way he touches
the chess pieces

5 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

Oh, yeah. Right on!

7:27 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

check mate! :)

6:12 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Love chess. Very good Tim!!

4:08 AM  
Blogger polona said...

made me smile :)

11:20 AM  
Blogger Aurora said...

I'd take out "by" as in:

inexperience exposed --
the way he touches
the chess pieces

:)

Chess is my very favourite game.

4:30 PM  

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