Tuesday, May 23, 2006

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by selfishness

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I cry out to God:
"Please change my heart!"

7 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

Wonderful!! I love poems with visual things! :)

5:17 AM  
Blogger Poetry by Kai said...

interesting poem....

awesome poetry:)

4:29 PM  
Blogger polona said...

wow! interesting, and very well done!

6:30 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Love the angst, honesty and sincerity in this!! He will too!

9:03 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Hi Tim,

You both being an aussie and a Queenslander, you definitely don't need to change your heart.

It's very moving, and I like your experimenting with the first line.

8:26 AM  
Blogger Tim S said...

Thanks all very much for your comments and feedback, I appreciate it.

5:25 AM  
Blogger Tim S said...

Alan: I assure you, I am in need of a masterful heart surgeon! That is - Jesus Christ.

4:58 AM  

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