Tuesday, May 23, 2006

soft soccer lights...
a skateboarder's playground
lit up

6 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

lots of things to "see" - very nice

5:18 AM  
Blogger polona said...

i like this one - very visual...

6:28 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Tim this is excellent!!

9:01 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

This reminds me a little of a haiku by Paul Janeczko:

stickball players shout
as moonlight floods their field
from curb to curb

You have only one skateboarder, which makes it poignant to me leastways.

I like that alliteration as well!

8:31 AM  
Blogger Tim S said...

Thanks all, I'm glad you liked the poem.

5:30 AM  
Blogger Paul Hill said...

Alright, you have a good blog going on, keep up the good work.

Check out mine if you want at:
http://blog.myspace.com/paulhilluk

5:47 PM  

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