Monday, May 15, 2006

holiday driving...
her hand between my
shoulder blades

5 Comments:

Blogger polona said...

well done!

11:15 AM  
Blogger Aurora said...

I agree with Polona. This is well done. You're really getting the hang of this, Tim.:)

1:20 PM  
Blogger Tim S said...

Thanks guys!

10:07 PM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Mmmmmmn! (-;

It shouldn't work maybe, but it does so very beautifully.

I think that's the way with some classic haiku, so simple you have to blink!

Very very good, and gorgeous simplicity and economy of words.

I'm definitely keeping this with me when I go on my haiku writing journeys.

Thank you Tim!

8:34 AM  
Blogger Tim S said...

Thanks Alan, I'm stoked!

8:58 AM  

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